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Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#people #technology #man
Nowadays, there is a dramatic change in the type of
food
 people consume. Convenience foods become are a major part of most people's diet, especially in developed countries. Considering the strong influence of
this
 trend on global
food
 habits, it is often claimed that the popularity of
such
food
 will rise substantially in the future and traditional foods will disappear.
However
, I completely disagree with
this
 statement. There are two main reasons why traditional cuisine is likely to retain its popularity in the coming yeas.
Firstly
, the increase in the number of different disease and mutation of existing viruses have rendered cooking necessary. In the past, due to the fast pace of life, people
prefered
Correct your spelling
prefer
 to purchase
food
, so they were able to save time. Definitely,
this
 way of living was more convenient those times. But in today's world, the Covid-19 pandemic that I pandemic of coronavirus disease 2019 makes it clear that preparing
food
 in their own may contribute to the transmission of disease. Since, according to research, heat treatment kills most viruses including coronavirus.
Secondly
, in the reason of the growth of environmental pollution, the number of people with an allergy is increasing day by day. It is obvious that allergy suffers should monitor every component contained in the
food
 they consume. Most of them,
therefore
, prefer to use the safest means of satisfying their hunger. Since preparing
food
 in their own makes it possible to check the safety of each ingredient in advance, it generally turns out to be the safest option. Undoubtedly,
this
 trend is important prerequisites for increasing the popularity of traditional
food
. In conclusion, I strongly believe that there is a close relationship between our way of living and
food
 habits. In
this
 modern world, people are choosing to cook foods for two main reasons mentioned above. I have no doubt that traditional
food
 will be popular in the
next
 few decades.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social interaction
  • connect
  • communicate
  • video conferencing
  • stay in touch
  • online communities
  • forums
  • like-minded individuals
  • global communication
  • collaboration
  • access to information
  • knowledge
  • bridge the gap
  • social isolation
  • detachment
  • face-to-face communication
  • genuine human connection
  • maintain
  • real-life interactions
  • balance
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