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In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face-to-face meetings. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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 contemporary era, the
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 is changing by leaps and bounds. Nowadays, online meetings are an indispensable part of daily life. So, some people believe that it makes communication easier, whereas others argue that it creates more problems in workplaces than benefits. I totally agree with the
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 view. It has more pros than cons.
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 and foremost, Covid-19 pandemic has hit
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orld harder than any other else. Online meetings are only things, which can alive the
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. People are getting done work from their homes, because of
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 transportation cost is being reduced drastically.
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, work from home culture, not only reduces air emissions but
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 mitigates traffic congestion in metropolises as well.
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 to the above, to run these meetings are easier, effective and requires less time.
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, each and every employee has a smartphone, so they can do their work online and submit to the compies. Many people can join a meeting across the
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, virtual meetings need a high-speed internet connection, which rural regions haven't.
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, in face-to-face meetings eye contact with the employees can give a better understanding than the virtual meetings.
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, if an employee faces problem-related to the task,
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 in virtual meetings it would not solve according to the advice of the technician, because of
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 he or she should skip the meeting. To conclude, online meetings are the best for
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 pandemic time, in which health concerns are at most. Its pros outweigh cons.
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