Some people say that children should go to school as young as possible, while others believe that children should go to school when they are at least seven years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals believe that it is important for young children to go to

school

as soon as possible, while other people think

school

is for children who are 7 years old.

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essay will discuss both views whether which is a better argument.

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I will give my own opinion and respect for the idea children should go to as young as possible. On the one hand, some individuals believe that young children should stay at home until they are 7 years old. The main reason for

this

argument is that they think younger ages are really important for brain development and they are afraid of the misguidance possibility of their children.

However

,

this

action increases the tendency of being an introvert human being and it absolutely affects children’s mental health later in life.

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childhood spent without friends could create a more computer-based lifestyle when

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person gets old. On the

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hand, there are many reasons why some people think that children should participate in

school

as young as possible. One of them is that children can have more ability to improve their independence.

For instance

, when children study in a boarding

school

, they have to tidy up all their stuff from cleaning their room to rearrange their study corner.

Also

, children will have a lot of chances to learn about interaction with other children and

this

will help them to have priceless memories with their friends.

Moreover

, they don't have to spend their life in front of a computer when they get older because of their already improved communication skills which come from the interaction with friends and teachers through class and

school

. In conclusion,

although

I believe that both sides have strong arguments, my personal view is that children should not be sent to

school

until seven because childhood is a short period of life, so children should

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all their time to go to

school

in order to improve their experience ,

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kill of interaction and they deserve to get

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better memory with their friends which is priceless for any children.