In some countries, young people from the countryside are moving to larger towns and cities while older people are staying in the countryside. What problems might this cause ? What solutions can help to resolve this issue ?

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of the
water
implied in industrial, agricultural and domestic
use
in six different continents of the world. Overall, most of the continents spent the greatest amount of
water
for agricultural
use
, except
from
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North America and Europe. They used more
water
for industrial purposes. Central Asia used the highest percentage of
water
in the agricultural field, with 88%.
This
figure was followed by Africa and South Asia with 84% and 81% respectively.
However
, in countries
such
as North America and Europe,
agricultaral
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agricultural
uses of
water
were under 50%. In general, domestic and industrial
of
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water
uses were the lowest in several continents. In Central Asia, only 5% of the
water
was used in industrial fields and 7% in domestic
use
.
By contrast
, the uses of
water
in Europe for industrial purposes accounted for 53%.
Similarly
, North
america
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used 48% of
w
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ater
of
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the same field.
Lastly
, the highest percentage of
water
in domestic
use
was seen in South America with 19%, more than the
industrail
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industrial
field.
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