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In some countries, young people from the countryside are moving to larger towns and cities while older people are staying in the countryside. What problems might this cause ? What solutions can help to resolve this issue ?

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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of the
water
 implied in industrial, agricultural and domestic
use
 in six different continents of the world. Overall, most of the continents spent the greatest amount of
water
 for agricultural
use
, except
from
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North America and Europe. They used more
water
 for industrial purposes. Central Asia used the highest percentage of
water
 in the agricultural field, with 88%.
This
 figure was followed by Africa and South Asia with 84% and 81% respectively.
However
, in countries
such
 as North America and Europe,
agricultaral
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agricultural
 uses of
water
 were under 50%. In general, domestic and industrial
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water
 uses were the lowest in several continents. In Central Asia, only 5% of the
water
 was used in industrial fields and 7% in domestic
use
.
By contrast
, the uses of
water
 in Europe for industrial purposes accounted for 53%.
Similarly
, North
america
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 used 48% of
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ater
of
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 the same field.
Lastly
, the highest percentage of
water
 in domestic
use
 was seen in South America with 19%, more than the
industrail
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industrial
 field.
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