In many countries ,small shops are closing.Give your reasons about this also is it a positive or a negative development?
There is no doubt that many local business firms farming and allied area could not grow more since they hard to find a place to sell their products and the entire sector would be badly impacted and they gradually and slowly face financial instability and they may fail to repay their debts to the bank. unemployment and tarnish of
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