With easier access to the internet many students are turning to online sources to study instead of the library. State some of the problems caused by this and methods to address them.

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nternet has brought a revolution in human life.
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nternet to complete their daily tasks. Many scholars have
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will provide some solutions to mitigate these problems. The
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difficulty arises due to
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trend is that students are not getting to reliable resources.
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, they have access to the internet, but they do not have proper sources from which they can get correct knowledge. On the internet, anyone can share any data without having proof of correctness.
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, students come out with having improper knowledge about any subject. To cite an example, Wikipedia is a website where anyone can put and change any data while accessing it and people read that inputs.
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, libraries are losing their existence. Governments are not providing enough funding to maintain and update these premises due to less popularity and few public visits.
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, these knowledge sources will lose its existence. The solutions are very simple. All we need is the awareness and strong will power among the masses and the authorities. The
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ncrease the funding to the public libraries by the Government and the other authorities.
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