Nowadays as a part of the education process students are working for a company for a short period of time without pay. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this ? Give your own opinion

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odern
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necessary for every student and it is more beneficial for individuals and organizations while drawback
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very few. On the one hand,
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systems are improved by the
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to
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ompany and
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students because the freshers are desperate to learn new things and organizations complete their project with low cost.
In addition
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tudent for their future professional life. On the other hands, doing internships with studies are difficult to manage, because
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organizations consider them as a
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employee and expect more
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times, intern
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to companies for completing their task even regular employees leave early from offices.
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, industries have to face huge risk because they
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a task to
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who
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any kind of practical knowledge about the products as well as market competitions. Sometimes companies bear big loses. To summarize, practical experiences are important with theoretical studies which give advantage to young people for easy access to enter companies but few
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exist which are spend
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