You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Rohit I hope you are doing great. I am writing

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letter in response to your complaint letter that you sent me yesterday about the noise from our flat. I sincerely apologise for the inconvenience and humbly ask for your forgiveness. We are new in

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building and just moved

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week. It’s a shame that due to pandemic restrictions, we could not get a chance to meet and greet our friendly neighbourhood yet. I would like to express a genuine reason for the noise and destruction caused by us. We have almost settled down.

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, we realised that we could not install smoke safety detectors in the living room, which is the mandatory requirement as per the council law.

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, we rushed into it, and during

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course of action, accidentally safety pad slipped from my hands, and it kept bouncing on the floor before it landed

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our building foyer with an unpleasant noise. We are incredibly sorry that your child nap was interrupted. I regret the event and request your forgiveness. Please accept

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box of dark chocolate( no nuts) along with

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letter as a token of my most profound regret for the inconvenience. We ensure you that we will be more careful ahead and keep our eyes and mind on task so we can avoid these

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. Sincerely

Mecky

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Becky

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

226 words

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