People are becoming dependent on the Internet and phone. Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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omputer and mobile phone in a habit. I think the drawbacks outweigh the advantages. In

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both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. Nowadays everybody gets at least one technological things,

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adget, a laptop and so on. There is no doubt it has changed our life so much, meanwhile, there are some disadvantages.

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, it has changed our way of communication and

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is common that we use apps to have a conversation.

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, it is not a

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of

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kind of contact.

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, we do not have emotional communication.

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, the relation of people

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not as close as before.

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some benefits, like it has

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the development of the economy. It helps many

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corporations

to contact which can build up their business.

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, there are many companies

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eed to through

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nternet to keep in touch with their business partner and make deals with them.

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, it improves our convenience. The evidence is when we get lost, we cannot

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ocated where we are. But now we can use the google map to get a location.

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us go everywhere that we can not get lost. In conclusion,

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we becoming dependent the technological science which

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us less

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emotional communication.

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, I strongly believe that the advantages

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conomy and the

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