You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter explain what you would like to do explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution

Dear Ram,
Hi
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How are you?
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it's been so long since I
last
wrote
you
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. Some exciting news. I'll be living in your city coming two years for my higher studies. I've decided to study Advanced programming for a better career. As I searched for some good colleges that
provides
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best
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teaching in
this
course, most of the findings are in your city. As you know, I'm working as an IT technician in Wipro
from
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past
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the past
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2-years. During
this
time I enjoyed my work and learned many interesting careers I can choose with a degree in Advanced programming. I
also
want to study
in
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abroad to experience the different
culture
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,
also
at the same time learning valuable life skills. To my surprise, there are
atleast
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at least
7 colleges in your city that accepts international students. I would like to ask you in choosing an appropriate college based on the
amenties
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amenities
available for the international students, and
also
close to you so I don't feel
home sick
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. Please let me know. Your friend, Srinath
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