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Test and examinations are a central feature of school system in many countries. Do you think educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

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The current educational system is continuously evolving, and with it, so is the evaluation mechanism. Exams are a very important feature for recognizing the capability of a
student
. In
this
 essay, I shall outline why is it mandatory for timely evaluations. In a lot of European and East Asian countries, the emphasis is laid on practical understanding. Consider the example of Japan; where the students are only taught the basics of science and are asked to perform experiments on the subject and understand the functioning.
This
 type of teaching, even though is very rudimentary, brings out the best in the
student
 because they are practically implementing what they are learning. Timely experiments and oral examinations are followed suit on which students are graded throughout the year.
However
, in a lot of south-east Asian and South American countries like India and Brazil, teachers generally advocate the students to follow the textbook and ask them to reproduce the knowledge during monthly tests and assignments.
However
, the whole idea of the evaluation is based on how a
student
 utilizes the appropriate concept for the question. I believe that
this
 type of education is
also
 important, as the
student
 learns to implement the concept
instead
 of just mugging it up. According to me, evaluating a
student
's understanding of language is a very difficult task for a teacher. The examiner must consider both verbal as well as written exams to judge a
student
's understanding and reproducing capability. Language plays an important role in shaping the career of a
student
,
hence
 it is very important that a
student
 learns the appropriate pronunciation. To conclude, each type of philosophy of education adopted by a country and testing mechanism has its own advantage and it simply encourages to bring out the best in a
student
 as well as test the
student
's retention power. In my view, even though there may be some disadvantages
such
 as it stresses the
student
 out during exam time; in the end, basically, it just prepares the person for the stresses of life in the future.
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