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In many countries, people would rather rent a house instead of buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting

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Even in today's modern world, some people still find
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 fundamental to own a
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 while others believe renting is better. While renting a
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 can be much faster than buying
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, there are pros and cons to consider when thinking about either of them. Nowadays, many people are adept to moving frequently from
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place
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 to another. For those, renting a
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 is a great and less headache way to manage quick changes.
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 of spending heaps of money and time looking for a
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 to call home, they can rent an instant hotel or even a
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quickier
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quicker
 than investing in a
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 for short-time.
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, buying a
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 can provide peace and state as
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 does not have to worry about renting agreements, rules and contracts.
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, renovating an own space makes more sense than putting an effort on a
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 which someday is going to be left behind.
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, it is likely to manage a home rather than a temporary
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 it, there are advantages and disadvantages in renting a
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 as when buying
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. Finding out which could suit
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 best can be hard but possible to be decided through a pros and cons list.
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