By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no doubt that, even, today there are some nations order judicial execution to delinquents. I firmly against
this
unacceptable way of punishment because by doing
this
our society
also
repeating the same mistakes. The primary reason why I think
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capital punishment is wrong because killing is not a
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permanent
solution for reducing crime rates,
instead
, the culprits should get a
second
chance.
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, by rehabilitating cold-blooded criminals would send a message to society that they can change to a better person and become useful to their society and public.
For example
, Adu Jose, a notorious murderer, who repented his wrongdoings and turned
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to be a social worker, who
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in various rehabilitation programmes.
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sentencing for death would alter the mindset and guide to a new vision. Another point here is that it is unethical to take others lives, even, it is in the name of punishment. When we consider a humanitarian background, no one has the right to behead anyone for whatever reasons. In some Gulf countries,
for instance
, the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia, where still, they follow
this
hienious
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outdated penal system. Alternatively, the authority of these nations says that
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penal system would send a strong message to potential criminals who are still outside. In conclusion, it is thought that life imprisonment is far better than
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eath warrant. I strongly support
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viewpoint since the long jail term can change an offender to a socially acceptable person and it is an ethical way as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • capital punishment
  • irreversible
  • deterrence
  • rehabilitation
  • human rights
  • ethical dilemma
  • state-sponsored
  • vindicate
  • incarceration
  • due process
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