You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter • give details of the camera and where you bought it • explain what has happened • say what you want him/her to do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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letter in reference to a purchase that was made on 10 July 2020 from your company outlet at Duty-Free in New Delhi Airport while I was travelling from Delhi to Bangalore. To be specific, I brought a Nikon 3300 DSLR with a dual-lens feature and the colour of the camera is silver grey. Since it was in a sealed bag, I couldn’t open it to verify.
Furthermore
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, I would like to update
that
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you that
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upon reaching my destination, I opened the packet and found that the battery charger is missing. I have checked all the items separately
however
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, it’s just the charger which I am unable to find,
this
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includes connector and cable
both
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apply
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. I paid via visa card and explicitly remember that the order was placed by your Sales Representative
Ms.
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Ms
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Sakshi.
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, I reckon it could be a mistake.
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, for your reference, I am attaching a xerox of the bill along with the snapshots of the package as well, requesting you to kindly dispatch the charger as soon as possible so I can work on my assignments.
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, I have enclosed my contact details. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Regards, Swarnim Tripathi
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • local representative
  • important items missing
  • purchase details
  • model and brand
  • missing accessories
  • inconvenience
  • use to its full extent
  • urgent request
  • partial refund
  • alternative solution
  • exchange unit
  • correct the issue
  • look forward to your prompt response
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