You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter • give details of the camera and where you bought it • explain what has happened • say what you want him/her to do about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter in reference to a purchase that was made on 10 July 2020 from your company outlet at Duty-Free in New Delhi Airport while I was travelling from Delhi to Bangalore. To be specific, I brought a Nikon 3300 DSLR with a dual-lens feature and the colour of the camera is silver grey. Since it was in a sealed bag, I couldn’t open it to verify.
Furthermore
, I would like to update that
upon reaching my destination, I opened the packet and found that the battery charger is missing. I have checked all the items separately Correct pronoun usage
you that
however
, it’s just the charger which I am unable to find, this
includes connector and cable both
. I paid via visa card and explicitly remember that the order was placed by your Sales Representative Correct pronoun usage
apply
Ms.
Sakshi.
Change the punctuation
Ms
Although
, I reckon it could be a mistake. Therefore
, for your reference, I am attaching a xerox of the bill along with the snapshots of the package as well, requesting you to kindly dispatch the charger as soon as possible so I can work on my assignments. Also
, I have enclosed my contact details.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Swarnim TripathiSubmitted by stripathi1992 on
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