Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that zoos serve the purpose of entertainment.

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animal activists advocate that these establishments must be shut down, others think that these provide knowledge and amusement. In my opinion, I firmly back the former's claims as creatures are abused severely. On the one hand, those who debate in favour of closing zoos argue that the animals live in captivity, where they experience several kinds of abuses from both security staff and visitors.

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is because many people have not been

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these creatures in a proper manner.It is important to remember

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when any wild animal removes from its natural habitat and keeps in isolation would lead some psychological imbalances.

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, without realising

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,

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,these innocent animals would be beaten starved to death if they misbehaved;

therefore

, these are unethical and should be closed forever. By viewing

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point, I strongly support

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argument.

On the other hand

, opponents of the above-mentioned view think that it is essential to maintain zoos as it brings many benefits to society.

Firstly

,

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gives an opportunity to see animals in close proximity, which can be a novel experience for both children and adults because many common people's financial status would not be allowed to go for a jungle safari.

Additionally

,

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place, nowadays, uses for some breeding programme.

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, Thiruvanathapuram Zoo, where they bread King Croba, a snake.

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,

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group believes

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should be remained open, even, the future as well. In conclusion, while it is sometimes thought that zoos are the vital source of information and entertainment, the opponents think that it is unethical

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eep them in a cage. I consider it is unjust to keep them in a confined space for humans' pleasure.