In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What types of changes are occuring ? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?
There are several reasons why the family position has changes in modern life.
Firstly
, a few decades ago, there were normally three or four generations living under the same house. Linking Words
However
, nowadays, nuclear families and one-person households are becoming increasingly popular. The cost of living has increased significantly, which prevents people from having too many children. Linking Words
Secondly
, fathers traditionally play an important role in pillars, while the job of housework is done by mothers. Linking Words
Nonetheless
, many women in today’s society have the opportunity to have qualifications and pursue their careers, and family financial burdens are now shared by both fathers and mothers.
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However
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this
trend brings both positive effects and negative effects in some ways. Children of small families are given better education opportunities. Linking Words
Therefore
, many offspring have the opportunity to study abroad and gain international qualifications, which would ensure a better job after graduation. One main drawback is that parents are now working too busy to take care of their offspring. Without parental care and guidance, children may have various problems; Linking Words
for example
, they may have to experience feelings of aloneness and isolation. Linking Words
As a result
, some children could take part in criminal activities Linking Words
such
( như sử dụng ma túy bất hợp pháp hoặc cờ bạc bất hợp pháp) which may destroy their future.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why the family position has changed, and Linking Words
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trend has both advantages and disadvantages.Linking Words
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