It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best for both individual and society. Do you agree or disagree? give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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to get married once they set their carrier.While it is said that
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should get married before the age of 30.
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,It would be a good decision for both
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partners
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without the carrier plan.In
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person to person that when to decide to get married.
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a crucial rule in
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human's
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.It could put
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individual
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responsibility comes in our
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after getting married
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as future plan about how to survive in
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financialy
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financially
and kids plan
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respectively
. Because parents are not will longer responsible for their
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children
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partners should be earning,If in case of sickness or job lay off problem the other
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can handle out the situation.
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is not restricted or banned in the rules. We
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should
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our
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to get married before the right time.
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responsibility of parents to
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encourage
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aspects. conclude, There will be everything appropriate as long as the
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carrier is
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settled
while getting married. My recommendation
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a responsible person before
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married.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Maturity
  • Stability
  • Demographic structure
  • Fertility rates
  • Healthy pregnancy outcomes
  • Professional goals
  • Societal pressure
  • Cultural norms
  • Long-term partnerships
  • Autonomy
  • Personal freedom
  • Family planning
  • Balanced relationships
  • Population growth
  • Emotional maturity
  • Financial stability
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