You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: • state your reason for writing • describe the problem and your concerns • explain what you would like the Principal to do.

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Dear Sir, I am a student at your college and I am perusing Business English studies in your school. And, I want to tell you that we summer coop is part of our course. But I heard from my teachers that

this

training programme has been cancelled

this

year. But

this

work placement is very important for us as work experience because

this

is the golden chance for us to utilize summer vocations and to get experience in our field. Because after summer

vocation

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vacation

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, continuous one year we will be busy in our academic studies. Even though, after that, if we will try to apply for jobs, so, it will be demanded by all the companies to have work experience.

Also

, if we will try for placement after studies

then

it may take our whole one year. I hope that you will consider our concern and the importance of coop for our bright career. And, you will try to figure out another solution to provide training ,for us. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

178 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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