Some people think that national sports teams and individual men and women who represent their country should be financially supported by the government. However, others argue that they should be funded by non-government sources (e.g. Business, scholarships, etc.). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Certain folks presume that teams representing a nation in
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international competition should be financed by the authorities whereas, others think that non-governmental organisation should shoulder
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it is argued that NGO'S should fund
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sports so the government could focus on more pressing needs but I strongly believe the authorities are well-funded to take
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with, if NGO'S finance these teams, the public would suffer as some of the funds meant for charity or medical care would be used up for fun.
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, it can result to loss of life because the rural communities who as the primary benefactor of
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organisation will not reserve adequate support and I believe is morally justifiable that the public needs are met
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before throwing money into a competition. At Lokoja
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, the villagers solely depend on world health organisation support to cater to their healthcare facilities so thousands would suffer if
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help fails to come.
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, the government have enough financial strength to shoulder the needs of these sports professionals since they need a world-class treatment at all time.
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, the toexpensesnses will be too much for a charity firm to handle and It is
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evident that poor treatment
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affects the sports individuals output during a competition. During the 2008 nations cup for the example, the super eagle's exit at the group stage was clearly attributed to the poor hosting by the Nigerian government. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the authorities are in a better position the finance
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trips since they have huge funds at their disposal so the other firms would focus on the less privileged. In conclusion,
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some people argue that non-government firms should be responsible for hosting athletic professionals during a tournament,
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, I think the authorities should be responsible for
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since they have access to an enormous amount of fund, so the disabled can still receive help from the NGO.
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