Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Every year, a
country
goes through a lot of changes in terms of its economy,
population
and environment. As the world becomes more and more competitive, every
country
tries to bring about a lot of changes to sustain
this
competition.
This
essay will discuss the problems that my
country
will face in the
next
ten years and look at how these problems can be overcome.
First
and foremost, since India is growing in Industrial automation and manufacturing section, a lot of factories are been set up.
This
shall lead to deforestation along with increasing the pollutants being emitted in the air.
This
increase
in air pollution shall have an adverse effect on global warming,
thus
increasing the melting of ice over the Arctic and Antarctic regions, and all in all, lead to
increase
in seawater levels. India is currently the
second most
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populous
country
in the world. A
further
increase
in
population
,
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shall result in additional stress on the already finely balanced socio-economic structure of the
country
and the gap between the poor and the rich shall
further
increase
. Space constraint shall be an additional challenge to cater to the demands of the increasing
population
. The cities will become more crowded and the government will tap the rural areas for more urban development to try to accommodate the increasing
population
.
Thirdly
, the number of schools and institutions and the teaching staff is limited in India.
For instance
, according to the data as per Central Board of education, the current ratio of teacher to students is 1:60. In the coming years, due to technological advancements, teaching will become more online and the traditional classroom methodology will disappear.
This
will lead to more one-way communication from the teacher to the student and not both ways. As per my view, planning well in advance to meet the future requirements, will be of utmost importance. Switching over to more renewable source of energy, will lead to less emissions in the air and quality of pollutants emitted shall decrease. Conserving the depleting sources of energy and preserving the forest areas will be crucial for the future generations. Small, but vital steps taken now, will prove to be of great benefit in the coming years.
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