Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. What are the causes and give your solutions?
Nowadays, young people are often being taught to believe in themselves. It might lead to a problem that they may show less respect for others. In
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essay, the causes of the problem will be discussed and some possible solutions will be provided.
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behaviour may come from being overconfident. In fact, youngsters are often being told that they should believe in what they are doing and Linking Words
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may cause a reverse effect that young people may not easily open to suggestions but always think that their thought is correct. Since they are young and lack of experience, Linking Words
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characteristic may not change if they have never encountered any failure in their life.
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problem and one of them should be to educate students about the value of each individual. Linking Words
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, young people need to be able to value different opinions and understand that they are not about being personal but rather constructive since others may only want to help. Linking Words
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, the ability to listen to other people's thought and analyse them is Linking Words
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, with some changes to education systems, young people should be encouraged to believe in what they can do as well as respect other people's abilities.
To conclude, it is true that young people may need to learn how to communicate with others with politeness and respect. It may need to start with the education which provided for them by teaching them to listen to other ideas and thought.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite