Many people buy products that they do not really need and replace old products with new ones. Why do people buy things they do not really need? Do you think this is a good thing?

Capitalism changes the world not just globally
also
individually which is mainly about people spending habit.The production cycle is
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improving
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and because of that advertising agency is demanding industry in the world for promoting people to buy a new thing mainly they don't need.
However
,we can't ignore the impact of social pressure on social media websites
such
as celebrity endorsement.
This
type of advertisement mainly about luxury fashion or self-care brands.Another main type is mainly spread among young ones,which is using the
atest
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latest
gadgets to show their friends and make
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healthy impression in front of them.
This
phenomenon can origin the ord of the
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south
out
mouth
of expensive items and make them replace their electronic products to keep up with the trends.Vast advertisement is commonly based on commercial channel newspaper and magazines and
this
has huge pressure for people to follow the trends Most of the people think that
this
can help to grow the finance side of the world,but I mainly disagree with
this
idea.In view of the fact that damaged caused by
this
such
as environmental and mental outweighed its positive side.Misuse of brand awareness can
cause
an addiction to
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things and individuals can face credit risk for
this
.
This
can bring with itself not satisfied individuals economic status and it
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mental stress.
Furthermore
, buying new gadgets
also
a waste of money, but throwing the old ones not only wither wealth
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but
also
harm the environment, because the batteries of these appliances produce harmful chemicals which
cause
pollution in the environment and that
further
cause
disease. To conclude,people need to be aware of how advertising and social influence can change their spending habit and make them buying
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nnecessary product.Our main aid needs to be not showing success by buying new items,it needs to protect
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nvironment and our mental health.
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