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in the future, it seems more difficult to live on the earth. some people think more money should be spent on researching other planet to live, such as mars. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Nowadays, due to the drastically increased number of population and environmental issues, it's becoming hard to live on the world earth. Some people believe that scientists should spend more time and money on researching the possibility of life on other planets
such
 as mars. I agree
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 the above statement as life is getting worse for both humans and animals.
To begin
 with, in
this
 modern era,
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ncreasing number of people and industries are negatively affecting the environment.
However
,
this
 is obvious that more people will need more houses to live in. So, they are cutting down the trees and replacing them with skyscrapers which are not environment friendly.
Thus
, we should have another asteroid to share the load of earth.
Moreover
, smoke released from factories leads to the depletion of
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zone layer. Getting shifted to another planet globe will
also
 stop the holes in the ozone layer that allow the ultraviolet radiations
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directly attack our skin causing skin problems.
Furthermore
, having life on other planets
such
 as mars will
also
 make animals independent and safe.
However
, the electric wires in cities and towns are dangerous of most of the birds. High electricity towers produce an electric current that attracts bird towards them and eventually they are being killed. Since
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ast few decades
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we have lost many kinds of birds only because of
this
. we can save their lives if some proportion of the population is transferred to another sphere.  In conclusion, spending money on searching for a place to live other than
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lobe is a good idea and it's going to be successful actually. Because it's becoming difficult to live on dust for animals and humans.
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