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In many countries youngers are more aggresive and disrespectful now compared to the past.Why is this happening? What can be done to improve the situation.

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Nowadays we often notice that a plethora of youngsters is more belligerent and disrespectful
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 to the past. There could be many possible reasons for it.
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, the environment in which a person lives has a humongous impact on behaviour change.
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, if a youngster engrosses himself around people with absurd ethics and standards he will adopt them in no time.
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, parents play an imperative role in it.Teenage is a stage of life when youngsters can be modelled according to the parents.It is essential for them to look after their children problems.Unfortunately, we notice many parents are busy in their routine schedule that they rarely get time to spend with their children.
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, youngsters adopt company which are inappropriate for the sake of spending time.
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, as the world is leading to a competitive environment which is embarking stress from the early stages of life
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 as in schools and colleges for being the ranker.
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, lack of opportunities in the individual fields even after studying for years are making youngsters depressed and ultimately leading them to be more aggressive and disrespectful.
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, for every problem,there is a solution.Parents should support their children in times of sorrows and embolden them with their profound words.
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, the government should provide jobs for the youngsters who are literate but could not find a job due to lack of chances and recommendations.
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, good habits should be inculcated from childhood by parents.Schools and colleges
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 of focussing on the ranks should pay attention to grow the talent of the individual according to their interest. To recapitulate, there was no competition, people don not use to run behind the money, there were huge scopes in the past compared to now.youngsters used to be nonchalant and respectful in the past.
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, a person should always focus on their interest rather than earning.Ultimately, his interest in learning will lead him to diminish his/her stress levels and make him/her successful in the world.And the government should take serious action to provide more opportunities in every sector of jobs.

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