You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
Dear Sir,
I am a student
of
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in
first
year studying Mechanical Engineering Correct pronoun usage
my first
in
your college. I am writing Change preposition
at
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction about to room
, I am living in with a fellow student.
This
room
was alloted
to me Correct your spelling
allotted
allocated
allowed
in
the Change preposition
at
begining
of the course. Correct your spelling
beginning
First
few days were fine but after that problems started to arise. Correct article usage
The first
Firstly
, this
room
has no internet access, which is an essential resource in my studies. Secondly
, my room
partner is non-cooperative and he makes room
uninhabitableCorrect article usage
the room
to live
. Verb problem
apply
Lastly
, bathroom
has no supply of hot water and as you know winters are going on so is it even difficult to use Add an article
the bathroom
basic
facilities of washing with cold water.
Correct article usage
the basic
Nonetheless
, I have tried to explain my situation to you because of these things I am unable to concentrate on the
studies. Change the word
my
Therefore
, I request you to kindly shift me to a new room
.
I look forward to hearing a positive response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Jatinder.Submitted by mrsdns on
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task achievement
Be sure to avoid minor grammatical and punctuation errors for a higher score. For instance, 'alloted' should be 'allotted' and 'begining' should be 'beginning'.
coherence cohesion
Include a brief mention of how these problems affect your studies right after introducing them for a smoother transition.
task achievement
Provide specific examples of how the noise or behavior of your roommate affects your ability to study to add more depth to your complaint.
logical structure
The letter has a clear and logical structure, making it easy to follow your points.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is formal and appropriate for the audience.
greeting and closing
You've ended the letter with a polite closing, which maintains the formality.