The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peae. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The electricity become core part of
in
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human life.
The lots
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of technologies
has
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been developed to provide clean and cheap
ennergy
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energy
to the
world
. The one of the best
candidate
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on
this
is a nuclear
power
station.
Although
, It was discovered as
n
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uclear weapon. Some scientist
believe
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that
b
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enefits of nuclear
technolgy
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technology
have more advantages
then
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disadvantages. As per my point of view, It has distractive
power
compair
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compare
to boon, use of technologies.
Firstly
,
w
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orld already
suffer
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3
dangoures
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dangers
events of nuclear
technolgies
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technologies
. The
first
event and most
hurtfull
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hurtful
event was when
U
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.S throw
n
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uclear bomb into japan. The
surviour
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survivor
saviour
of the area still getting a scar of
thier
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their
on their human body. The
last
two events are when
power
station unable to control the
rediation
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radiation
, there have to empty 100km per
squre
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square
foot to avoid for any human
affect
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by
this
. There are
e
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dge of the out of control, if they
didnot
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did not
didn't
make it, that would be million people could
lost
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their life.
Secondly
, Nuclear
engery
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energy
are
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cheap but not
a
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clean.
For example
, There 1 tone of nuclear waste
ganerated
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generated
in every six
month
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by only one nuclear
power
station and they have to dig up 800
meter
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meters
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dig up
g
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round and dump to avoid
environment
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damage. The waste is still activated for 200 years to
distrupt
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disrupt
surronded
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surrounded
ecology.
Thirdly
, If any 7 nuclear would be blasted as
s
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ame time. It could
be destroy
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the earth. There are more
then
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500 Only
power
stations have into
w
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orld. In a nutshell, Nuclear technologies have
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power
to help
human
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humanity
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but there are many side
effect
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effects
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, which could be
pottention
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potential
to
distroy
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destroy
the
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lives
lifes
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lives
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. Nuclear energy cheap but never have been clean. There are many
project
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projects
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going into
w
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orld to replace
the
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nuclear energy.
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