When cars and cyclists use the same roads, there are often problems. Why is this the case? What are the solutions?

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Roads are the
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transportation, they connect all cities across the country. Highways and freeways are
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particularly
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, but when it comes to the main roads in the suburbs, they are shared by everyone including cyclists. Use of
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cyclists and other
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vehicles
like cars sometimes may cause problems.
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discuss
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the issue and the potential solutions for the problems. A lot of people prefer bicycle for short distances, because not only riding a cycle is extremely
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health, but
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great fun.
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, cars and motorcycles drive speed on the same
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cyclists use,
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sometimes causes accidents on roads. These accidents are caused by different reasons
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as diver's lack of knowledge, improper traffic signs, and confusing traffic lights. Drivers who are new
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are always in stress and they are more
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vulnerable
to make accidents. These drivers confuse with the special instructions or drive harsh and
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cyclists who are riding on
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oad. Special zones and traffic lights should be understood by both cyclists and
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vehicle
drivers to avoid accidents. There are a lot of incidents happened because of lack of
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knowledge
and negligency.
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, one day when I'm
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walking
working
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road
, I saw a car with
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entered into the cycle zone and
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a cyclist who is trying to
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r
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oad in his zone.
Cyclist
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got severely injured and
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admitted
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in hospital. In
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case
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it is
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happened
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because of the car driver's
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and lack of knowledge. These types of
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cases will
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happen because of the cyclist's
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. Best way
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this
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problem, is to educate drivers and cyclists about the
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rules and its safe usage.
Government
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should impose strict laws and
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for the
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violation
of the
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rules. They should
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take care of the signs which may confuse the riders and driver, so they can reduce the confusion. Governments should improve the roads and special zones to the cyclists, by doing these improvements governments can solve
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issue.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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