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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people say that making young people work for free will benefit both the local
community
 and youngsters.
This
 essay totally agrees with
this
 statement because it will give the adolescent more experience in life and it will avoid laziness and drug consuming. Working for free provides teenagers with a way to learn about helping the
community
 without expecting something for a change. By doing some tasks like painting houses or cleaning streets will teach them that job satisfaction is not always about money but about helping other people, and
that is
 the best teaching adults can give young people.
For example
, in a recent survey done by United Society found that many success Chinese people in the United States were taught to help their
community
 for free and that helped them to achieve success not looking for money but for making a better world.
Moreover
, some teenager tends to waste their free
time
 by playing video games or even worst, consuming drugs or alcohol. If youngsters seize
this
 free
time
 by working and helping other people they will have less
time
 to waste and more
time
 building a better life for them and their
community
, and less drug consumption and laziness.
For example
, an Oxford University
research
Replace the word
researchers
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 found that 90% of teenagers that had a problem with drugs, stopped consuming after they got a job. In conclusion, teenagers should start working for free at their local
community
 to learn about the importance of helping other people despite they are not receiving any money and avoid waste of
time
 that could lead them to consume drugs or alcohol.
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