You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We had entered in the
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twenty
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first
century , even today around fifty
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of the world population remains below
poverty
. Even today developed or developing countries
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s
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ignificant percentage of poor people and each of these countries have different legislation of dealing with
poverty
.
This
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some reasons
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the
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poverty
and will suggest the ways of overcoming the same.
Firstly
, one of the important cause of
this
poverty
is seen
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related
with
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the literacy
rate
that each
country
have that means developed countries with high literacy
rate
have lower
poverty
percentile .
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, countries like Africa , India and
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middle east which have literacy
rate
have more than sixty
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of population below
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overty line.
Secondly
, poor economic and social reforms by the government of any
country
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ital role in defining the wealth prosperity of its people.
For example
middle
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east countries which are oil reach
is still not be
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able to save its people from
the
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poverty
. In order to
over come
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this
problem its the collective responsibility of every individual to work together.
Firstly
, awareness of
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education has to be strengthened and made free to all , so that
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oming generation of millennial can get themselves in
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ob or can do their own startup to support their families.
secondly
, each
country
government should ensure that each family breadwinner should be supported with a job so that he or she can raise the family.
Lastly
, population control is
also
one of the
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to improve the
poverty
rate
.
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China which introduced
one child
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policy in 1958 has successfully able to
over come
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overcome
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poverty
to large extent and had
have
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the fastest GDP growth To conclude,
its
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is very important to accept
poverty
as the major problem for any
country
and its people. But with good legislation policies , awareness , reforms and individual effort any
country
can
over come
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overcome
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this
problem in the years to come
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