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Band 3.5

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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recent decades, ever since the
techonology
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technology
 revolution, the way of
exchange
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 information is
also
 changed in many ways. In fact, nowadays,
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instead
 of
writting
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writing
 a
letter
 to some, individuals
perfer
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prefer
 to write an email.
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The mode
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 of
communiction
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communication
 has changed, because of telecommunication advancement in
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 world. In
olden
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the olden
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 days
people
use
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used
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 to send letters via post which
use
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used
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 to take longer time to
delivaring
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deliver
 and
getting back
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get
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its response,
due to
an
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the
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 internet facility it
becomes
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became
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 so handy that
people
 started sending messages in
fraction
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a fraction
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 of
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a seconds
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seconds
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second
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 by email,
whats
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WhatsApp
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 app and many social media platforms. To
exmplify
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simplify
,
letter
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letters
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 could not preserved for
longer
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a longer
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 period of time,
where
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whereas
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 emails, text messages,
photos
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and photos
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, shared by any could be saved in
gmail
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Gmail
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 or cloud nine for years
togather
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together
 and
availabel
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available
 in just one click when you want to refer
it
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. Because
of
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global warming is
burning
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a burning
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 issue for many countries,
world
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the world
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 is going towards paperless transections, and by doing
this
 indirectly it would
to
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save our
enviorment
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environment
.
As many
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 woods are destroyed to meet the demand
of
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for
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 paper every year. Many
corporates
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 are going for
paperless
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a paperless
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 culture to save the
enviorment
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environment
. Being
reposnsible
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responsible
human
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humans
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, should avoid
use
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the use
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 of paper.
For instance
, if
people
use
 digital media to send
letter
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letters
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,
instead
 of
traditional
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the traditional
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 way of sending
letter
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letters
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, it would reach quickly and help to save our
enviorment
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environment
 too.
On the other hand
, many critics argue, that
writting
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writing
letter
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letters
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 has more weightage and
important
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, as they
corelate
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correlate
relate
with emotions or they
many
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may
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 not be very
friendly
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familiar
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 with new technology. Many
people
 still
writing
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write
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 letters as they find it more
convient
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convenient
.
To conclude
, as many emotions are attached
with
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to
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 sending
letter
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a letter
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 in
olden
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the olden
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 days, but in
this
 contemporary
life
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life,
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people
 have to take advantage of new technology which
save
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saves
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 time and
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the enviorment
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enviorment
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environment
 too.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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