You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest in the Digital Marketing
course
, which I saw in an advertisement on my way back home
last
week. I want to complete
this
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three weeks Digital Marketing
course
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. It covers not only the calculations of the number of clicks, completion rate and response rate but
also
how we can apply Market Basket Analysis in day to day operations. As mentioned in our offer letter, in order to gain promotion we need to complete one additional credit
course
before completing five years with the company.
Therefore
, I need your help to cover
the
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one-fourth of the tuition fee of the
course
, while the company covers only one-
third
of the fees. But it would be helpful if you could put across an application to cover more. The
course
covers a universe of marketing strategies in the digital world. It will not only help me with my promotion but will
also
result in an increase in performance. It will give me an opportunity to learn how we can increase the response rate on both online and offline platforms. I am looking forward to your response. Yours Sincerely, Chanda Lakhani
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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