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Some people with a good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What are the problems caused by this?

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It is indeed true that some of the experienced and knowledgeable people migrate to other countries. While people decide to move to different countries for a better lifestyle, I believe that there are some downsides to
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 trend. People having good education and experience in their field decide to go abroad for a better
life style
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lifestyle
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. When someone moves from a developing
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 to a developed one, they have better job opportunities, infrastructure and
other state
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another state
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 of the art facilities.
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, in my
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, India, it common for the contemporary youth to go to countries like Australia, Canada and the USA after completing their education, as they have better career prospects in developed countries.
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, people get handsome salary package in developed nations which three or four times as much as what they may get in their home
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. I think that these are some reasons why people decide to move to other countries.
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ualified and educated population decides to settle in another
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, there is a shortage of professionals in their homeland.
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, if professional doctors, engineers and teachers go to other countries, it will create a dearth of skilled professionals in their mother
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 why the government has to fill most of the vacancies with amateurs.
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, it would be dangerous when these people with less knowledge and experience perform their tasks. Apart from that
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 affect the
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 financially because there is a decline in the number of
tax payers
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taxpayers
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. In conclusion, educated and experienced people move to other countries to update their lifestyle; in my opinion,
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 culture affects the home
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 financially and
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 creates a shortage of professionals.

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