Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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of research. In my opinion, it is better to use printed materials, and I feel
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and the books are
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and there are more
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than
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ook, chapters are more safety than online articles.
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. My own experience, can
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how it is danger approach a subject by
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articles. Five years ago, when
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I was speeching a class in my pos -graduated
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ourse, I introduced an
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I received a terrible grade by
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rticle. Books are reviewed countless times before lunched.
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lunched by the universities, on the
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about
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the society should be more careful when
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some articles
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because they
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research, but we have to be attention. In conclusion, I
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believe that we can trust in books
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articles, books are ever unbiased. Articles, sometimes are biased and, much times
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industries. Wether population only trust in websites
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force and accuracy .
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