you arranged to visit a friend in canada but an importent event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit

Everybody knows that damage to the
environment
 can be harmful
for
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us and our
next
generation
.
Although
any issue about
e
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nvironment can affect our daily life, unfortunately nowadays people do not care about environmental problems. Whereas the
environment
 is not important for many people. Education is an important factor to make people aware
about
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nature and it's important in our daily life as well as for our
next
generation
. In school
text book
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 environmental education should include, so our coming
generation
is going to be aware
about
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the
environment
. Most people do not think about prosperity for those who will live on the earth for upcoming  centuries.
For example
, people cut trees as much as they can for timber, paper and all our luxurious life. They do not care about the
environment
 and its damages.
Furthermore
, some of the environmental effects will not occur immediately by doing harmful actions by people.
Therefor
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people do not recognise bad impact immediately. 
For example
, many of the resources will not be available for 
our
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next
generation
.
Such
as
water
, nowadays there are many resources of
water
available and plenty of
water
is there now, so people are not saving
water
. They could not believe the small mistake could destroy the
environment
. Recently bushfires took place in Australia as well as in the U.S. California. A small fire burned huge jungle and
also
many animals died in
this
fire. To conclude, people do not care about
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environment
issues seriously. The
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behind
this
is lack of education and people are ignoring the future 
generation
need and requirements. They are thinking about the current situations only, not for long time possibilities and effects.
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