You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter: explain the reason for the party give the date and time of the party suggest what the classmate could bring to the party

Dear Tim, How are you? Hope you are enjoying the English lessons at the language school. Anyway, not sure if you are aware of it, but our good classmate, Robin, from Turkey is going to have his 19th birthday
next
Friday, which falls on
25th
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of September, and I have made a plan to make it a surprise birthday party. By the way, in case if you haven’t noticed, currently Robin is going through a rough time since he is feeling a bit more homesick than usual.
Besides
, he is
also
struggling a lot to get used to
this
new culture of a foreign country. On top of that, the news of his little sister’s sickness has
also
made him depressed. In
this
kind of situation, giving him a big surprise on his birthday would certainly cheer him up. Anyway, I already have a plan about who should bring what
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the party. Timothy and Kelly should bring their specially-made flower cake while Johnson should bring his guitar to play his special tune. As for you and me, we will bring the candles to decorate the cake, and the banners to decorate the room. Let's have a great party to cheer Robin up! Warm wishes, Justin Lee
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