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Nowadays, some people believe that personal values are less important than a person's wealth and appearance. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that in the modern world, personality is
unvalue
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unvalued
 and people only
value
 your status and money. I completely disagree with
this
 opinion and think that personality should be the
first
 impression.
First
 of all, personal
value
 is a scale to
value
 a person. A person with good
behavior
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 can easily communicate in public and get people’s impression. Those relationships can help them find a lot of advantageous opportunities. my
friend
 got a place in a cheering team because on the interview day, despite the others bragging about their beautiful clothes and how rich they are, my
friend
 tried to be herself and her talent. And she got attention from the teacher. That’s why people should be who they are and not be ashamed
about
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 that.
Secondly
, people who come to you because of who you are, are more important than those who just want to take advantage of your wealth. In order word, A good
friend
 is always with you no matter what. We want to have a good and constant
friend
 more than somebody just showing up when you having fun but ignoring you when you need help.
For example
, the time I came to Canada, I wasn't trying to show off my classmates , I am just normal and friendly with everyone. At the end of the semester, I was friends with everybody and still keep in touch with most of them. Money and appearance is your unstable
value
 and can not be important to
value
 a person. In conclusion, I strongly believe that people always
value
 your personality more than your status and appearance because it is never overlooked.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Personal values
  • Material wealth
  • Social status
  • Consumerism
  • Peer pressure
  • Integrity
  • Moral compass
  • Superficial
  • Inequality
  • Fulfillment
  • Ethics
  • Virtue
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Socio-economic ladder
  • Superficial relationships
  • Conscientious
  • Personal development
  • Self-worth
  • Character assessment
  • Intrinsic value
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