Nowadays, more and more people engage in dangerous activities, such as sky diving and motorcycling. Are you in favour of them? Use examples to support your opinion.

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It is undeniable that human beings are always eager to explore something new.

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, these days most of the people take part in adventurous activities, but I personally do not consider these kinds of things safe. I will discuss my viewpoint in detail with some supporting evidence.

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with, doing risky actions is not suitable for every single individual because some having a phobia from height, water and so on, but still people imitate others and initiate these type of things which may put their life into a big risk as they are not mentally prepared for the same.

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, it is seen that people lost their lives as well while doing dangerous activities just for the sake of entertainment. For instances, there have been some recorded instances of a group of friends who took part in bunjy jumping

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but was not able to concentrate and fell down with a serious injury.

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, these risky exercises should be considered on by expertise people.

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, taking a part in adventurous movements could be the reason of severe heart attack in some cases because if one is doing a sky diving,

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it is obvious that he/she has to jump from the height of either 10,000 km or 15,000 from the helicopter so in that case, the participant may lose the stamina and diagnose with the heart attack.

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, according to the news of the Hindustan Times in 2017, in Queensland, Newzealand 24 years old girl died due to heart attack when she was doing a sky diving. Overall, putting life into risk is not all about fun. To conclude, it is true that some folks are quite adventurous by nature that's why they engage in dangerous actions. As far as I concerned, I do not recommend these things, but there are

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individual preferences which could not be overlooked.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

thrill-seeking behavior
adrenaline junkie
extreme sports
risk assessment
safety protocols
mental resilience
physical endurance
overcoming phobias
personal empowerment
mitigate risks
hazardous pursuits
adventurous spirit
life-affirming experiences
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