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You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college. In your letter, you should tell: how you lost the certificate why you need it what you expect the principal to d

#course #certificate #college
Dear Principal, I'
m
 Dheeraj Sudarsanam. I completed my bachelors in IT
this
 year from your esteemed college. Two days back, I received a certificate from the college in my graduation
cermony
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ceremony
.
Whe
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We
When
Why
 I'
m
 travelling back to my home
in
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train
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, I lost my bag which has my
certifacte
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certificate
 and some other books including some cash. It is
stollen
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 by someone sitting
next
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 me, railway department confirmed that by looking in security cameras in train. I attending
a
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interview
 early
next
 week for an IT job
in
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 IBM. I have to carry my certificates with me when I'
m
walk
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 in for
interview
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.
Otherwise
, I'
m
 not
elligible
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eligible
 for
interview
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an interview
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.
This
 will
bothers
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 me a lot. As I'
m
 aware of the college policies, I'
m
elligible
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eligible
 to apply
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for reissuing
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reissuing
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 of the certificate. I kindly request you, to reissue my certificate
in
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apply
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this
 week so, I can
attened
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attend
interview
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the interview
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. Expecting a quick response
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