the topic: Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

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Education

is a mandatory need for humans.

Peeple

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think

education

is for earning, but

education

teaches you how

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ead a better life. Without

education

, there is no difference between

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human and other animals. Unfortunately, in today world,

education

becoming so expensive that not everyone can afford. A

lot

of people argue that

education

should be available to everyone irrespective of

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personal wealth. I partially agree with them and I will explain why in

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essay with some examples.

Education

is the way to

aquire

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acquire

knowledge. It gives you an opportunity to become a better version of yourself and it

also

changes your

presepective

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perspective

towards the world. For centuries, humans achieved a

lot

in science, medicine and technology by

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help

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eduction

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education

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and curiosity.

This

education

become

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expenssive

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expensive

becasue

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because

of a

lot

of reasons. High infrastructures, availability of resources, researches on

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articular field are making it

unaccessible

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to poor. Without basic

education

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people under the poverty line can't cross it. They need

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ducation to lead a better life, it opens

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oor of opportunities in life. There are a

lot

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foundations across

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lobe working on

this

issue by the help of UNO. Especially, in the

un developed

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countries, uneducation is a major issue. Basic

education

can reduce

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rime rate as well. Many governments are trying to improve the literacy rate, but still

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lot

to do. They should provide

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free basic

education

to all not only children

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but

also

uneducated adults.

This

will improve the situation.

On the other hand

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vailability of

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free

education

should have limits. Higher educations especially, degrees like medicine, engineering should be accessible to eligible students only. Anyone who

meet

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the

eligiblity

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eligibility

criteria should only enter into the universities.

This

eligibilty

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eligibility

should not be money, it should be

knowledge

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knowledgeable

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Otherwise

, the value of higher educations will be destroyed. To conclude, basic

education

should be available to everyone irrespective of their financial status.

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