you live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Smith,
My name is Jimena Ilaria, I am attending Medicine college, and I am writing to you in regard to some disturbances I have been facing the
last
weeks in my room
.
As you may be aware we are in the toughest part of the semester, having to take the final exam at the end
of the month. My colleague, the one with whom I am sharing the room
, has been inviting friends to the room
and they stay chatting until midnight. Even though I had already told her several times that I need
silence in the Wrong verb form
needed
room
and to please go somewhere else with their friends, she seemed to not care.
I would very much appreciate it if you could change me to another room
, I do not mind sharing a flat with someone else, I do not really need to be on my own but I really do need to be with someone respectful and understanding, that it is not the case right now.
Thank you for your attention on this
matter, I eagerly await your response.
Yours sincerely,
Jimena IlariaSubmitted by jimeilaria on
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The letter maintains a formal and polite tone, which is suitable for addressing an accommodation officer.
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