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Nowadays, technology has enable workers to work from home. Some people say it benefits only workers, not employers. Do you agree/disagree?

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The advancement in technology has progressed to
such
 an extent that people now are doing their
work
 from
home
. Few people opine that doing a job from
home
 with the help of developed technology is only beneficial for workers and not employers. In my view,
work
 from
home
 is more beneficial for employers compared to workers. There is no doubt that
work
 from
home
 has made employers job much easier and it encouraged to solve major issues which are not only concerned with professional life but
also
 personal life. It helped workers and employees to spend their valuable time with their families.
Additionally
,
work
 from
home made
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homemade
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 employers jobs more comfortable.
For instance
, they can conduct an office meeting through many social apps
instead
 of going to the office.
Moreover
, it helped employers in diminishing travelling.
Further
, it
also
 helped in reducing the workload.
However
,
work
 from
home
 has made the job of workers more difficult, leading to a perilous situation.
For instance
, we often notice that a plethora of workers used to come for earning from small villages or towns to eminent cities but due to
work
 from
home
 they hardly get a chance to
work
.
Furthermore
, due to the pandemic situation of COVID made their life miserable. In today's world, almost everything costs an arm and a leg and in
such
 an expensive world, they could hardly earn for their bread and butter.
In addition
, due to no source of income, we noticed that many poor workers, due to lack of opportunities committed suicides. To conclude,
work
 from
home
 has many advantages for employers but at the same time, it
also
 aroused many difficulties for workers who earn on daily basis.
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