Some people think that the government should use extra money to fund programs to improve the environment. Others think that it is better for the government to spend money to support artistic programs. Which option do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, it is very difficult choice the best manner to help the world. We live in middle a tribulation society, with a several problems about
environment
, pollution, politics and how money should be spend with these programs. Personally, I believe that the
government
should be spend money for help the
environment
. I feel
this
way for two reasons: we have to be able that decrease the Green house effect and relief emission of carbon monoxide.
To begin
with
for instance
, we have to look our forests, each day our woods have burnt, killing the animals and the savage life. It is have become normal, the industry and the
government
has thought only in business and forgetting the animal life. My personally experience is a compelling illustration of
this
. I live in Petrolina, a hottest and driest city, we have a huge river that across the city.
However
, the temperature has increased each year, the burning season and the illegal discart of trash, has caused fire. It is remarkable how the temperature has increased uncontrollably lately.
Furthermore
, the pollution gases, has been emitting sprawling, causing
consequently
the green house effect. We can compare the temperature from
last
years to now, the numbers increased.
Secondly
, it is have become normal, but it not enough the use of green energy and other way of transport. I have seen, countless people using their bikes, rollers, electric scooter for goes to their jobs.
Therefore
, amount the cars, compare the green ways transport, is massive. The people are only think on themselves. It is has been sprawling the carbon monoxide on our planet, causing a poisoning that our
environment
.
For instance
, it is more and more normal, we observe one personal each car. Why the
government
don´t develop an incentive law, for pick up to carry colleagues for job. In conclusion, in my opinion the artist and cultural programs, can develop and gave private sponsor, through website, social media and countless manners to do their jobs. The
government
, should spend money to create laws and programs to safe the
environment
and our woods, if
this
don´t do it, on
then
next
years will be impossible live on the earth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • allocate
  • allocate funds
  • environmental conservation
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable development
  • protect wildlife
  • reduce pollution
  • promote sustainability
  • artistic development
  • cultural expression
  • creative industries
  • nurture talent
  • artistic innovation
  • enrich society
  • budget allocation
  • prioritize
  • public opinion
  • government responsibility
  • social welfare
  • public wellbeing
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