Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are a group of people who believe that recent

generation

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should take actions to prevent extinction and damage on the

environment

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to be heritage to the

next

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generation

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. In my opinion,

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advice is important and I

am strongly agree

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with the sentence above.

Human

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and living creature can not live well without the existing of the

environment

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. Trees in

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the

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orest or which grow nearby produce oxygen, a molecule that needs by living creature to

breath

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breathe

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, and there is none in the world can substitute oxygen in our life.

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Environment

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keeps several wildlife animals

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as elephant, tiger, monkey and apes, and some exotic birds

species

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.

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, there are different

species

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of plants

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ide inside the forest and

other type

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another type

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of

environment

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. The richness and biodiversity should be protected and it needs to start from the recent

generation

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to make sure the

next

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generation

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can see and enjoy the benefit from

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similar

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. Its beauty, freshness, and originality are worth to keep for the future age.

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, our nature is already dying and getting less protected year by year. It is very terrifying because some

species

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are already extinct or become endangered

species

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(both animal and plant). Illegal logging, wildlife hunt and trade, and extension of palm oil plantation are few activities that affect deforestation and

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damage. If we do not stop

these kind

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of activities,

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iodiversity that covered in the meantime can not be accessed and seen by our offspring. I would like to summarize

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essay with a conclusion. We should take actions to stop our nature from damage and try to keep the

environment

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as same as the current situation so that

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ext

generation

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can enjoy the benefit of

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omplete

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from

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resent.