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Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are a group of people who believe that recent
generation
 should take actions to prevent extinction and damage on the
environment
 to be heritage to the
next
generation
. In my opinion,
this
 advice is important and I
am strongly agree
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 with the sentence above.
Human
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A human
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 and living creature can not live well without the existing of the
environment
. Trees in
f
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the
a
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orest or which grow nearby produce oxygen, a molecule that needs by living creature to
breath
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, and there is none in the world can substitute oxygen in our life.
Environment
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The environment
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also
 keeps several wildlife animals
such
 as elephant, tiger, monkey and apes, and some exotic birds
species
.
Besides
, there are different
species
 of plants
h
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ide inside the forest and
other type
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another type
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 of
environment
. The richness and biodiversity should be protected and it needs to start from the recent
generation
 to make sure the
next
generation
 can see and enjoy the benefit from
the
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a
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 similar
environment
. Its beauty, freshness, and originality are worth to keep for the future age.
However
, our nature is already dying and getting less protected year by year. It is very terrifying because some
species
 are already extinct or become endangered
species
 (both animal and plant). Illegal logging, wildlife hunt and trade, and extension of palm oil plantation are few activities that affect deforestation and
environment
 damage. If we do not stop
these kind
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this kind
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 of activities,
b
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the
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iodiversity that covered in the meantime can not be accessed and seen by our offspring. I would like to summarize
this
 essay with a conclusion. We should take actions to stop our nature from damage and try to keep the
environment
 as same as the current situation so that
n
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the
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ext
generation
 can enjoy the benefit of
c
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a
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omplete
environment
 from
p
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the
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resent.
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