Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays due to the feminist

moviment

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movement

more women are becoming relevant in workplaces where before was only

accupet

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occupied

by men. The universities are the

first

place where

this

moviment

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movement

of change should start and in

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I will give some

reason

why I agree which the number of women and men should be the same in universities. The society

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give

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to women more extra housing responsibilities than for men.

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, in a

tradional

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traditional

family it is common

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ive the

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clean the houses, take care of the children, preparing lunch and dinner for the mother while for men do not

share

these same

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responsibility

because of his works required more of him and he is tired to do house duties. Incentive the same number of women in

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niversity will allow shows that everything must be

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in a relationship because

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women

womens

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also

want study and women

also

want to

achivment

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achievement

their careers.

Althoug

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, women have theses dreams it is always let as a

second

plan because they have so much

responsibility

which

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share

with men.

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men had priority to start their study in past years. Whereas, women had to stay at home doing all these house works because universities

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not allowed to women at early 19 sec. Because of it men had the access to study before

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oman and they are currently the majority in workplaces and they have

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high salary even if the women do the same job. For

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reason

, when the

university

incentive the same number of male and female they are

incentiving

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incentivizing

incentivising

more women in workplaces and more salary competitive and fair for both gender and

also

it is giving to women the same benefits which

was

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given for men. In conclusion, because of the men must

leran

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learn

share

the

responsibility

at home to give more time and allow women

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ttend

university

. And, along with

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the same opportunities which before

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only for men in

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niversity are some

reason

which I agree that the numbers must be equality for women and men at universities.