Some people argue that technological inventions, such as mobile phones, are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?

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has impacted dramatically the human life. One of the aspects more affected has been the communication and interaction among relationships. Some people think that devices are changing

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peoples

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behaviour becoming more isolated. Others felt that

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opened more social opportunities to people who live in another country or loss the contact of old friends. I

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completely

agree with the

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view. Nowadays are more tools to be social and

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with others.

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of all, mobiles phones and other devices

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a paramount role in young people. Most of them spend

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average of 5 hours checking updates, emails, texts, or videos.

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behaviour

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common in many families across the world. Indeed, the

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survey of the Australian

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Psychology

Department illustrates that parents spend less time with their children compared to the past. One of the reasons for

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the influence of

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. Nowadays it less common that families shared meals because people are addictive with their phones.

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, parents are texting with their peers after job ,children are playing online games, and

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teenagers

are recording videos all the time.

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effects

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how families create bonds and strong relationships. Young people have to felt strong connections with their parents in order to prevent mental

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as depression or anxiety. So, it is crucial that families limited the used of

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devices to protect the

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families

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wellbeing.

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,

technogy

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technology

has helped

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connecting

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many people who live

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to their families or in another country. In the

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decade

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mobile phone and the internet allow people to be more closed. International students can

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maintain

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communication with their families and friends.

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, it is possible to shared photos, videos and letters at the time. Many people

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used social

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such

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as Facebook , twitter or

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to find older friends or siblings. Allowing the possibility to maintain relationships. In conclusion, the

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excessive

use of

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inventions can be affected

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relationships and the people life. People can be loss friends and broke bonds due to

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obsessive

behaviors

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as playing games or social

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.

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each person and

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of the family support.

technology

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brings

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benefits of communication and is the most powerful tool to make new friends and be present in the modern world.