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All children should study a foreign language in school , starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Communication plays a vital role in every
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 life. A
person
 should know how to speak in a common
language
 which the world is using today. Learning a foreign
language
 always helps a
person
 in his carrier life. I agree that every student must be trained in learning an International
language
 which helps them for their survival.
For instance
, if a
person
 has been selected for a job where he needs to travel overseas and comes up with a different
language
 to communicate with others, it would be difficult for him to
transulate
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translate
 into his
language
 and communicate.
Thus
, the Universities should train students on any foreign
language
 along with the academic subjects.
Furthermore
, people will excel in speaking
d
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ifferent
language
 only if they are trained
at
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 the earliest period. Considering, if the schools introduce a program of teaching
n
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ew
language
 as a
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, kids would get to know about the different
language
 at
their
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 young stage of their life.
For example
, a Russian native speaking
person
 who visited England who already
know
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 English
laungage
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language
, for him communicating with others will be easy as he is already familiar with other country
laungage
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language
. To conclude
this
 statement, I suggest that people should be trained in studying a foreign
laungage
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language
 right from their school and it should be included as a
manditary
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mandatory
mandatary
 subject for every student. Knowing a Foreign
Laungage
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Language
also
 boost the confidence of the
person
 thinking in
such
 a way that he can survive in any part of the world by communicating with others.
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