Young people are often influenced by their peers. Do the advantages of peer pressure outweigh the disadvantages?

It is inevitable that while children are growing up, they are impressed by their social environment.

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in developmental ages, children spend more time with their peers than their families. In my opinion, despite the fact that some drawbacks can occur, interactions with peers

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young people more positively.

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of all, before children started

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school, they had learnt everything from their families.

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, others have come into their lives that children have faced much more with them than their families just another day. We call them peers. Meanwhile, these young people affect

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others, who are at the same age, and shape their personalities mutually.

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, playing football with friends leads to a child makes a habit of

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sport and learns teamwork, that many job applications require these skills. For

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reason, when we are young, we gain our interests and social skills mostly by influences of our friends that it affects our older ages in a positive way.

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, children can develop bad behaviours due to the fact that their peers distract them. When the process at which a child adapt to

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school life, they are often exposed to their peers’ thoughts rather than the speeches are told by their elders.

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, since children make their lunch together at school, their eating habits can resemble.

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, a child may not eat vegetables,

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they are told by parents as healthy nutritions.

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, these interactions are temporary, that a person will leave

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habits when he becomes conscious. In conclusion, even though there are some disadvantages of peers’ pressure on a child’s personality,

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these are not lasting impressions.

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, the peers’ positive effects on a child’s personality outweigh the negatives in the long run.