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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages? Give your opinion.

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An increasing number of students are opting foreign institutions for
further
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this
 trend and give my opinion on how studying in a university abroad will have more benefits than studying in a local college. Universities in developed countries offer multiple benefits. Because
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 the facilities offered there is by far much modernized than what is available in a developing country.
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ertification we receive at the end of the course have got worldwide acceptance too which will provide better career opportunities.
For instance
, as per reports, more than 90% of the students who are getting graduated from these institutes are staying back or moving some other developed countries for employment. These factors clearly suggest why more and more students prefer
this
 mode of higher studies. Having said that, there are drawbacks too when some move to a new nation.
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, adjusting with a new culture can be a huge problem with many wards.
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inguistic problem. Conversing with different nationalities who will be classmates or hostel mates could turn out to be a challenge in the initial months. But, the consolation part is, as per the available data majority of the students were able to overcome these issues in a span of months. To conclude, studying overseas is an increasing trend among college-goers.
This
 essay discussed how beneficial is getting graduated from abroad compared with studying locally. Based on these facts, in my opinion, even though these youngsters have to go through some tough period in the initial stages, the experience and certification they receive will be worthy for life.
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