Some people believe that the government should financially support retired people. Others feel that those who have retired should pay to support themselves. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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people are retired, they should continue to pay to , while others argue that these people must be supported by the

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in terms of living costs. I believe that the people who worked at their early ages or have disabilities should be bolstered by the

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. On the one hand, every country has their own politics on the retirement of its citizens. In the past, due to the fact that these people were deemed as productive workforce, they had contributed to their country’s development.

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, factory workers may encounter an accident while they are working in a

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process.

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,

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an accident may

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to losing a part of the factory employee's body, and

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incident may be an obstacle for him to work again.

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, owing to their ages or disabilities, retired citizens can not maintain a standard of living as before without the

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's aid.

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, the pension costs are considered as a burden to countries’ economy, that they are regularly paid to retired citizens.

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,

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circumstance prevents creating a budget for other projects of the

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which are more advantageous for the development.

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, these payments may hinder to carry out new innovative projects. To illustrate, there are many retired people who utilized the early retirement program at their early ages in my country. Even though these people are still considered as

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force, they have not worked for many years. For

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reason, they can make their money without the

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's financial supports. In conclusion,

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some people reckon the retired citizens as a burden to the

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, these people can not retain their lives due to their physical conditions.

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, the

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should be responsible for looking after these citizens.