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Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?

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Today human beings are living in
such
 a world where they enjoying
l
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onger
life
 span. A longer
life
 span means more experience.
However
, people think that retirement is a rest
time
 from stressful
life
 at an
oder
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older
age
. Normally
age
 of sixty-five is considered as a relaxing
time
 from active Job
life
 routine. These people can contribute to society in various ways.
For instance
, share their experience with young people, give advice, create
a
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ond
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bond
and
 between old and new generations. It is often seen that many people considered retirement
life
 is as their
second
life
 to achieve another goal. Due to regular job
work
 pressure, many people keep their hobbies aside. They can do activities related to their hobbies and create an example for
y
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oung
generation
 how to utilise
time
. Communities can arrange a few sessions with Old people and young
generation
 to inspire their
life
 & teach how to stand hard for good values. Another example is, a service sector can conduct regular sessions for old
age
 employee where they can actually
work
 with the young
work force
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. They should not be considered as full-
time
work
 employees but they can mentor young workers. Communities should arrange get-togethers for older
age
 people & small kids to create a strong bond between them. The aged community can
also
work
 on their pending projects with the young
generation
 and create miracles. Today's
generation
 living in the virtual world and spends more
time
 on social media. Old
generation
 can teach them how to face real-
life
 problems and to over-comes on it. I am very sure if
life
 long experience and new
generation
work
 together amazing things can happen.
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